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This is why Prime likes Road Rage so much, she'll kick your ass, then apologize and visit you in the hospital. Now that's a lady with class.

Transformers © HasTak
A Talented Amateur © Nagi-Oki

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:iconha-heeprime:
Hey pal. This'll be a quick crit, but I hope it's helpful. I like this one: Good writing and characterization, creative poses, funny props (chair pillow, bandages etc.), and Grimlock's punchline is win. The writing is clever and often funny, especially "Throw me out the window!" and of course, Grimlock's sponge bath. Blackarachnia is believable while also being hilarious, so great characterization on her. You do well with keeping the panels from getting too visually cluttered: the props help tell the story; they don't confuse it. My only problem here is the textured wall. It is taking attention away from the characters.
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:iconechowing:
I like Road Rage's apology. :D

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William Rendfeld
That EchoWing Guy...
Author of "Transformers: Armada (Revisited)"
:iconnagi-oki:
I know, she tries to do right. She has to set a good example for Gurf.

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I'm Tracks
in the Transformers-Crew!

I'm Tracks in the G1 Crew on DA
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:iconcharmedserenity:
:rofl:

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:iconrevan117:
Road Rage: The Girl Next Door of DOOOOOOM!

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"You can't run from death forever... but you can make the
son of a bitch work for it."
-My Grandfather, two weeks before he passed away at the age of 103.
:iconepscillion:
XD Grimlock the nurse. haha Cute! But also a frightening notion... *imagines all of the char-broiled patients*

--
G1 Starscream comments on Ani-Starscream

"It's like looking into a mirror. Except it's one of those funny house mirrors where everything is horribly distorted and...oh sweet Primus! Is that my chin?!"
:iconnagi-oki:
I'll take nurse Morphine, nurse Codine, or nurse Vicadin any day of the week over Grimlock.

But don't tell him I said that.

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I'm Tracks
in the Transformers-Crew!

I'm Tracks in the G1 Crew on DA
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:iconbioc:
Quick! Throw me out the window!

You have a talent to find exactly the right words,
that make me laugh out loud.

:D

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*insert witty phrase here*
:iconnagi-oki:
Heh heh heh, yea, now too bad I can't charge you guys for my sense of humor.

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I'm Tracks
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I'm Tracks in the G1 Crew on DA
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